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Firenze (Florence - Italy) 2009... :heart:

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:iconwilderbeest:
Lovely setting we have here. The midtones are really washed out in this photo, particularly the sky and hills in the background. This is a pity because the lighting (angle of sunlight) is great for the architecture.

To my eye, the photo looks a little soft, almost as if too much noise-reduction has been applied, which gives an almost artificial feel to the image. The bridge and the trees in particular are too blurry.

The colours appear very muted too, but this could be the time of year, and some people do prefer that. This image would be completely different if it was taken through a polarising filter, the blue haze in the distance would be reduced, the sky would be darker and bluer, and the clouds whiter - thereby offering a much more pleasing contract to the sky.
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To start things off, this is an absolutely lovely photograph. The lighting is absolutely gorgeous in general; it really brings out the architecture of the buildings and the bridge as well as the reflections in the water.
As a continuation from the critique prior to mine, the sky is a bit "dotty" (for lack of a better word). I would recommend softening the sky portion of this photograph; it would fit in much better with everything else.
One other thing I would recommend adding, however, is a border of some sort and a signature as well. In my opinion, those elements would make this look a little more professional.
With that aside, though, this is a remarkable capture, and I know I'm not the only one looking forward to more works from =Wimley in the future.
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Finally something breathtaking!

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great! :D

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Thanks !! :D

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;)

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*a beautiful view from Ponte Vecchio :)

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Thanks Milen !!

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oh...i am either tired or it looks as if that bridge was moving:)

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